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Sunday, September 21, 2008
turning on the imagination
for my first studio project, i had to create a logo, a tagline, and a signature for the word "visualization". i demonstrated what three combinations of images by playing with color and scale.
POSITIVE!!! The overal intent of you design is very cohesive and all tha elements work well together. The color in your signature really enhances the light bulb and the signature. I also really like the way you simplified the bulb and made it readable in teh logo, and then a tad bit more complex in the signature (and it is still readable).
constructive... One thing you could consider is putting the logo and tagline in a 12x12 format, one of the requirements for this project is to put them on a 12x12 layout I believe. It might be nice to see some of the color used in the signature in the tagline, like the purple background. I like the setup of the logo, tagline, then signature, but once you put it in the 12x12 layout, the signature in the middle may make the transition more effective.
(+) +The light bulb with the V is clever. +"Visulization" with the tag line fits really well spatially in the B&W image. +The colors you chose in the third image really complement each other well.
(...) - Still wish that the reflections mirrored more accurately with the light. - Maybe have the top band of the light bulb line up with the other indention in the bulb's body. - Might want to examine the scale of the light bulb on the second image; it appears as though it is floating slightly above the text.
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POSITIVE!!! The overal intent of you design is very cohesive and all tha elements work well together. The color in your signature really enhances the light bulb and the signature. I also really like the way you simplified the bulb and made it readable in teh logo, and then a tad bit more complex in the signature (and it is still readable).
constructive... One thing you could consider is putting the logo and tagline in a 12x12 format, one of the requirements for this project is to put them on a 12x12 layout I believe. It might be nice to see some of the color used in the signature in the tagline, like the purple background. I like the setup of the logo, tagline, then signature, but once you put it in the 12x12 layout, the signature in the middle may make the transition more effective.
(+)
+The light bulb with the V is clever.
+"Visulization" with the tag line fits really well spatially in the B&W image.
+The colors you chose in the third image really complement each other well.
(...)
- Still wish that the reflections mirrored more accurately with the light.
- Maybe have the top band of the light bulb line up with the other indention in the bulb's body.
- Might want to examine the scale of the light bulb on the second image; it appears as though it is floating slightly above the text.
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